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In some countries today, there is an attitude that 'anyone can do it' in the arts - music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree

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I agree that so many
people
 with no talent in the present time are becoming wealthy and popular, while the actually greatly talented
people
 are not valued enough nor appreciated in some societies.
Initially
, I believe society these days is very critical, which leads them to
putting
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 the wrong
people
 in the spotlight. Many factors contribute to the act of criticism, like beauty
standards
.
For instance
, anyone could get known just because they're attractive or fit the unrealistic beauty
standards
 now, which makes them think they can do
art
 when they can't.
As a result
,
this
 issue makes it harder for the genuinely talented
people
 out there to get their fame.
Moreover
, most
people
 at the current time enjoy watching ridiculous things and call
it
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them
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art
. I think that they
dont
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don't
 see arts like music, drama,
literature
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or literature
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like
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the way other individuals do.
For example
,
people
 who are enriched with talent and have an
art
 viewpoint or perception, understand
art
 truly and are so rare in my personal opinion.
Furthermore
, I have a personal experience which supports my argument. Me, as a guitarist, I have been posting my performances daily on social media. I rarely get interactions, even though
,
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 my playing is very great, but when another pretty, gorgeous person does the same thing, they immediately blow up despite their horrible talent which is extremely unfair. To conclude, the community's unattainable
standards
 have made absurd
people
 prominent, whereas
the
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brilliant artists are more likely to be underrated. Adding to that, It seems to me that if the general lowered their
standards
, the problem would be solved.
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