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Nowadays people spend a lot of money for sport and cultural events Discuss both views

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In recent years it has become far more normal for
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 to spend more money on things particularly entertaining ones
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 sports or cultural
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 in the developed world. In my opinion ,
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 has both positive and negative sides in equal measure. On the one hand, nowadays, these kinds of
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 are not just
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 most
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people
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 treat them as an opportunity to have fun. Enjoyment is the priority during festival times.
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 relaxing they are good ways of releasing stress or long-term positive memories. Sometimes individual's strong passion for something pursues them to spend a lot . I can give my cousin as an example, several years ago one of the most famous motivators Nick Vucic came to Uzbekistan. My cousin was a great fan of
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the motivational speech he bought tickets despite being overestimated.
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, these
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 attract a lot of
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 from different tracks of life which provides a perfect chance for
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 to unite and bond. There are several married couples who met each other in the cinemas or at concerts.
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,I agree with those who argue that the cost of these
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 is overpriced. Funds spent on them are a complete waste of money.
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 of investing huge amounts of money ,
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 should make their quality of life much better by buying new houses or apartments with good amenities.
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 insecure taking into consideration modern theatres related to terrorism. Many terroristic organizations choose these
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 as their targets. In conclusion, we shouldn't be extravagant and living in monotonous lifestyle is
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 bad. We should keep a balance between them.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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