During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restrauants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, remind him when and where you met, tell him what kind of job you are interested in, say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter with regard to remind you about a job you can offer me. We had met
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a plane and we were travelling by 'Singapore Airlines' to Australia. It was flight number SQU317 and you
was
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sitting beside me
and
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then
we started talking on various topics and while talking, you told me that you own a chain of
restrauants
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restaurants
.
Also
, when we were travelling the date was
9th
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of September year 2022.
Furthermore
, I am interested in a chef's job
it
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can be junior or head chef of the kitchen. I love to experiment
various
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kind
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kinds
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of cuisines which can be introduced as
special
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dish
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to the customers.
Moreover
, I would be a perfect fit for the cooking job because I have previous experience
of
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working and handling a huge kitchen. Apart from that, there are many degrees which I hold for cooking
numeorus
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numerous
type of cuisines. Looking forward to a positive and prompt response. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Shah Harshil
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