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Hello, my name is Unal. Today I and my groupmates are going to talk about our achievements in terms of the
project
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 called “Rescued Lives” and the procedures which took until
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 period.
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 with, there are some reasons for the establishment of
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project
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. The
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 possible reason was enlightening people about animal
welfare
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 in the region and invoking them to cease animal abuse. As we know, animal
welfare
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 is one of the most encountered problems in Azerbaijan. In order to get rid of the problem, we decided to take several steps for raising awareness of animal
welfare
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.
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, our aim so far was encouraging people to recognize animal sentience. What we needed from the students
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 was
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 remark for the
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 review of post–
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 of the
project
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, so we primed a survey among ADA students. We planned to make
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a donation
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donation
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 for the shelter and visit
shelter
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the shelter
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 to make close contact with street animals. As
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, we made polls among ADA students to recognize their attitude toward stray animals.
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, we decided that our team members give information to their neighbourhood based on animal
welfare
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. To enlarge the coverage, we needed to share our work outside of the class.
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, we commenced to create a social media account and posted our accomplishments in terms of the current
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. Now, Nigar will deal with the initial procedures.
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