The government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Some people hold the view that the authorities spend money irrationally funding
arts
, musical concerts and so on whereas it would be better to use the Use synonyms
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infrastructure
. I am inclined to agree with Use synonyms
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arts
. Even though art is an important part of humans' lives that enables individuals to express themselves and broaden their horizons. The notions will be examined in the essay.
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arts
being a significant part of society’s life which gives the opportunity to people to be creative and entertain others, public Use synonyms
infrastructure
is a cornerstone of humans' existence. Use synonyms
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next
to impossible for adults to work without electricity in the contemporary world and do chores without a water supply let alone create art. Linking Words
Thus
, if public services did not work properly mankind would be stuck in the past era. Linking Words
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arts
would not be relevant at all because people had to make considerable effort to survive.
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, it might be true that it is probably better to allocate Linking Words
finances
to public Use synonyms
infrastructure
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arts
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For example
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, sometimes it is crucial to allocate Linking Words
finances
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instead
of music or theatre because citizens' lives depend on Linking Words
this
.
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arts
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infrastructure
is highly important to citizens. Use synonyms
Thus
, it is paramount to spend money on civil services in the Linking Words
first
place because art is secondary in terms of people’s comfort.Linking Words
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