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Due to the influence of worldwide media such as television and computers, the gap between cultures is narrowing. The introduction of this 'global culture' is of great benefit to the world. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint?

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Nowadays, because of the improvement
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 technology, we can easily communicate and interact with
people
 in different countries. It is argued that due to
this
 situation, the gap between
cultures
 is getting smaller and smaller, and
people
 around the world will
also
 benefit from
this
 circumstance. In my opinion, I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. There are some
people
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 that because of the increasing use of worldwide media,
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traditional
cultures
 face some difficulties. The reason is that
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younger are more likely to be attracted by foreign
cultures
 through media, including foreign food, fashion, and
also
 customs.
Thus
, the traditional ones may be forgotten by
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 generation and cannot be passed on.
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societies might come through some cultural conflicts.
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cultural beliefs are might suppressed by other countries’ beliefs.
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 there are some cons, more
people
 think that the concept of “global culture” benefits the world.
Firstly
, by learning and understanding different
cultures
,
people
 can broaden their horizons and
also
 achieve plenty of
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 that
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 very different from their culture.
Secondly
, living
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 global village together can help to reduce racism, prejudice, and
also
 war. The more
people
 worldwide know about each other, the
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gap will be narrowing. In conclusion, there are some conflicts that may destruct the local culture.
Nevertheless
, overall the better outcomes exceed the drawbacks, as long as
people
 have open-mind and
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willing to accept new things.
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