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WHAT ARE THE KEY PROBLEMS FACING THE WORLD'S CITIES IN 21ST CENTURY. AND WHAT CAN BE DONE ABOUT IT?

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The increasing number of cities in the 21st century has been a cause of concern for some time.
Such
 a
problem
 watching around the world.
However
, it seems to be increasingly clear that
this
 development is causing problems in our urban areas.
First
 of all, bad traffic makes a big
problem
 for logistics and casual
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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.
For example
, Incorrect build of it make traffic jams,
consequently
, we need to much more time for movement.
This
 is bad for our society.
In addition
, Another worrying trend is trash around the city.
For instance
,That shows as
the
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urban areas can not be spotless.
As a result
,
This
 leads bad impression for foreigners
that
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which
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 causes bad economic development. What is needed to combat these
problem
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problems
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 is definite action. It is suggested that government must find ways to reduce
this
 solution,
nevertheless
, all
actionі
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actions
 start with citizens.
Moreover
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 The traffic must be
recounstraction
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reconstruction
 for more useless ones.
Instead
, more bins should be added on a street. Young people may be able to find information about bad
of
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trash around the world. In conclusion, I think that all
city
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cities
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 have serious problems with that, but it solves easier when you know the reason
of
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problem
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the problem
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. The public must
shows
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suffering
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the suffering
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 that
such
problem
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a problem
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 brings.
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