Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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teachers

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,while others believe that

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side for pupils studying and

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teachers

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pupils

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, that's why more and more

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parents

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.A prime example of how

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look out for their

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analysis,despite the fact that teaching all

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and

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future. From my way of thinking,introducing might all pupil's

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very well and

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their skills.