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Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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●Discipline is one of the growing problems in modern schools. Some think that discipline
teachers
 should be more responsible, while others think that
parents
 have a big role in making their children polite and disciplined. I think it mostly depends on the
parents
 ●
On the other hand
, many
people
 depend more on the
parents
 for the
students'
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student's
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 attendance and attendance at school, because if
parents
 bring up their children, they behave in the same way at school and at home.
For example
, there is a saying in your
people
 that a child is a mirror of its father and mother, and so are its
parents
.
Therefore
, many
parents
 should be strict in their child's
education
 and should give good
education
 to their child from a young age, and
this
 will ensure that the children will be self-disciplined everywhere. ●
On the other hand
, many
people
 think that how
students
 behave in public depends on the
behavior
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 and discipline of
students
, and the strictness and
education
 given by
students
, because
students
 spend a
third
 of their days in school, and according to statistics,
students
 are talking about
teachers
 who teach well and follow the
education
 given by them, and
this
 is a clear proof of their dependence on
teachers
. ●In conclusion, some
people
 say that the discipline of
students
'
education
 depends more on fathers and mothers
,
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 because in your
people
, they do what they want. Some say it depends on the
teachers
. According to meaning, fathers are more dependent on mothers
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