Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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. Few humans strongly believe that

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ought to responsibility of tutors, while

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others

think that

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is the role of

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and fathers. From my point of view, it more depends on

parents

because

students

are more together with their

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essay, I discuss both these will be considered and elucidated. On the one hand, majorities

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believe that

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children

are mainly couched by

parents

because since

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birth, they

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closly

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closely

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parents

.

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,

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tend on training their

children

because

parents

teach a lot of

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their

children

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as

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up earlier in the morning.

Also

, the

students

are together with

parents

than

teachers

because

children

are raised by their

parents

until they go to high school.

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, according to psychology research

parents

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behaviours

more influence

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because if it has

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atmosphere in

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,

students

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discipline is more

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.

On the other hand

,

teachers

have a special role in disciplining

children

, because if

parents

teach

children

from the worldly side,

teachers

will give them knowledge and help them to find their way in the future.

In addition

,

teachers

have a lot of knowledge about culture.

For example

, in my country, many people believe that

teachers

should

also

strictly control the education of

students

. In conclusion, it can be said that both

parents

and

teachers

have a great contribution to the education of teenagers

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because

students

spend a lot of time with their

parents

and

teachers

.