On a recent holiday you lost valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: -describe the item you lost -explain how you lost it -tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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letter for your intention for my
lost
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valuable
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item
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during my recent holiday in Bali on 15th December 2022. The
item
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that I lost
a
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medium size brown
handbag
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, inside the
handbag
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there are some important documents, an Apple watch S7 and
200 dollar
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bills. On my
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day of
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, I went to a
restaurant
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near my hotel, after that I went to a shopping mall and I realised I left my
handbag
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at the
restaurant
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, but when I went back to the
restaurant
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and asked about my
handbag
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,nobody noticed my
handbag
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. There are no CCTVs in that
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.
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, I do not have any clue
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my lost
item
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. As I know that your insurance company will cover the cost of the lost
item
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. Please advise me about the procedure for claiming the insurance and how much can i claim the maximum amount on my lost
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. I am expecting your response as soon as possible. I hope to hear from you soon
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and thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Lynda
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