On a recent holiday you lost valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: -describe the item you lost -explain how you lost it -tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter for your intention for my

lost

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valuable

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item

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during my recent holiday in Bali on 15th December 2022. The

item

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that I lost

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was a

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medium size brown

handbag

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, inside the

handbag

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there are some important documents, an Apple watch S7 and

200 dollar

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bills. On my

last

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day of

holiday

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, I went to a

restaurant

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near my hotel, after that I went to a shopping mall and I realised I left my

handbag

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at the

restaurant

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, but when I went back to the

restaurant

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and asked about my

handbag

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,nobody noticed my

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. There are no CCTVs in that

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, I do not have any clue

for

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my lost

item

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. As I know that your insurance company will cover the cost of the lost

item

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. Please advise me about the procedure for claiming the insurance and how much can i claim the maximum amount on my lost

item

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. I am expecting your response as soon as possible. I hope to hear from you soon

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and thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Lynda

yannaunghlaingWed Dec 14 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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181 words

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