Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many people hold the view that career development is more crucial rather than wasting
time
doing nothing to can have a successful life
. Others argue that spending time
with family and friends is worth more. In my opinion
I completely agree with the Add a comma
,opinion
first
view, and in this
essay
I will explain why and draw my own conclusion.
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,essay
First
of all, life
is become hard and hard and to have a good and satisfying life
people should work hard and focus on how to improve their careers in the future. The reason behind this
is that all jobs now required many skills and an enormous number of professional certificates and it is critical to spend time
to have one or two of them. For example
, these days finance students to have an amazing job in government or authority in Saudi Arabia they must have a CFA level 1 or 2 to can apply for these professional jobs.
On the other hand
, hard-working individuals can have a chance to spend time
with their siblings and their friends and develop themselves at the same time
. This
is because humans have 24 hours per day and if they organise their tasks they will have a happy and fantastic life
. For instance
, students in university can manage their time
to study on weekdays and on the weekend have a break and spend it with their parents to do what they like such
as hanging out and having dinner in a luxurious restaurant.
In conclusion, although
spending time
with friends and family is incredibly essential to enjoy life
. Organizing a specific time
per day to prepare and develop skills related to their major will provide them such
a wonderful future.Change preposition
with such
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