In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree?

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Adverts
of
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beer, wine and
spirit
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spirits
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are being banned in many nations.
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essay agrees with
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statement because we all know
alcohol
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is bad for our health
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the social vices it causes. Advertising
alcoholic
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brands should be stopped because
its
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harmful to a
persons
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health. Too much consumption of alcoholic beverages will lead to diseases
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as liver cancer and brain toxicity.
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,
this
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substance
are
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hard to quit once addicted to it.
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, these big companies
uses
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famous celebrities to endorse the products and sway potential consumers without warning of the dangers.
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, Tanduay a local
brandy
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brand
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in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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wherein a lot of people patronizes
this
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brand with high demand and positive reviews.
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, many people get sick and it
resulted
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strain on
health
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system of the state. Another reason why the promotion of
alcohol
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should be prohibited is the alarming number of crimes being reported
everyday
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.
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, humans tend to have delusions once they get drank and rampant killing, rape, and suicide
committed
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due to
its
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intoxication.
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,
alcohol
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is implicated in social and
psychologic
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problems, including arrest, violence and depression.
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,
Russian
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Russia
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has a big problem with alcoholism and decided to stop companies
in
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advertising the products in TV and print ads, its effect was a massive change in
peoples
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behaviour. In conclusion,
alcohol
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is a hazardous product and advertisers should not be allowed to convince people to try and drink it. I,
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,
belive
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that more countries should
banned
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ban
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advertising liquors.
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