Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having lot of money make people happy? What other things can make people happy?

Some
people
associate
money
with pleasure. While
money
is crucial, I believe there are many other things that contribute
into
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making us feel
pleasured
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. On one hand, there are ample reasons to justify the importance of
money
.
To begin
with, the pressure will be gone when
people
have sufficient income in order to support themselves and their
family
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. With the inflation and declining economy,
people
are afraid that they will not be able to provide for their
family
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. If they do not need to be worried about that anymore, they will feel relieved and content.
Secondly
, our life will live to the fullest with the help of wealth.
Money
gives us the freedom that allows us to pursue our dreams.
For example
, we can choose to work on a degree where it doesn't
necessary
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provide a good outcome in terms of salary,
however
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we will get a sense of satisfaction from studying what we like.
On the other hand
, being rich is not the only thing that will make us happy. Research
revels
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that 70000 dollars a year
is
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the amount that
people
need in order to feel happy and satisfied. 70000 dollars is an adequate amount of
money
to
maintenance
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a decent life. We can
also
obtain happiness through spending quality time with family, improving our overall levels of fitness, helping the community with our skills and so on. In conclusion,
although
having enough
money
is crucial, it is not the only way to achieve happiness. There are plenty of things that we can work on in order to be content.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial security
  • Basic needs
  • Comfort
  • Luxury
  • Freedom
  • Altruistic
  • Philanthropy
  • Nurturing relationships
  • Fulfillment
  • Sense of accomplishment
  • Physical well-being
  • Spiritual beliefs
  • Community involvement
  • Gratitude
  • Mindfulness
  • Simple pleasures
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