You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your department had been given additional work at a company you work for which is creating problems. Write a letter to your manager. In it - Explain what the additional work is. - What problems are you facing due to extra work - Offer a solution to solve You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address.

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Dear Sir, I am writing because we have a

problem

in the transport department and new policy before we take the truck out from

yard

everyday

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every day

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. The new rule

for

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is for

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us to fill

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the form

a form

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form

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forms

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, check

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the tire

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tire

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tires

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and wheels and take

okay

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the okay

an okay

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sign

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signs

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from

yard

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the yard

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manager

and

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apply

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this

new

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a new

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problem

because the

manager

not coming to

yard

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the yard

a yard

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time

Also

, we are

truckdrivers

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truck drivers

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and asking us to do the

mekanics

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mechanics

job is not correct. I must

first

of all say that

this

is making big

problem

because we come to duty on

time

, fill

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out form

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form

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forms

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and

also

now doing all vehicle checks for safety. But the

manager

taking

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took

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time

to check the truck

one

before we can move out of

yard

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the yard

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. So we are not now starting driving at 6.00am but we start at 9.45am. We starting late from

yard

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the yard

a yard

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and so we are coming back late

also

This

is too much wasting

time

. So, I am making

one

suggestion for

yard

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the yard

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manager

to have

one

or two

assistant

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assistants

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who

check

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checks

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the truck document so we can leave

yard

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the yard

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fast on

time

This

solving

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solves

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problem

for all. Yours sincerely, Sam

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

194 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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