You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your department had been given additional work at a company you work for which is creating problems. Write a letter to your manager. In it - Explain what the additional work is. - What problems are you facing due to extra work - Offer a solution to solve You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address.

Dear Sir, I am writing because we have a
problem
in the transport department and new policy before we take the truck out from
yard
everyday
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. The new rule
for
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us to fill
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the form
a form
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form
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forms
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, check
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the tire
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tire
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tires
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and wheels and take
okay
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the okay
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sign
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from
yard
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the yard
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manager
and
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this
is
new
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a new
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problem
because the
manager
not coming to
yard
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the yard
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in
time
.
Also
, we are
truckdrivers
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and asking us to do the
mekanics
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mechanics
job is not correct. I must
first
of all say that
this
is making big
problem
because we come to duty on
time
, fill
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form
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and
also
now doing all vehicle checks for safety. But the
manager
taking
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more
time
to check the truck
one
by
one
before we can move out of
yard
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. So we are not now starting driving at 6.00am but we start at 9.45am. We starting late from
yard
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the yard
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and so we are coming back late
also
.
This
is too much wasting
time
. So, I am making
one
suggestion for
yard
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manager
to have
one
or two
assistant
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assistants
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who
check
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the truck document so we can leave
yard
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fast on
time
.
This
solving
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problem
for all. Yours sincerely, Sam
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