You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

this

letter regarding imposing restrictions on using community

hall

on Tuesday and Friday evenings.

To begin

with, we are a group of ten

people

who normally practise singing or dancing in

this

community

hall

on Tuesday and Friday evenings as we have other classes and part-time work on other days.

Moreover

, our group entertained with our talented music skills in order to make old

people

, who stay around

this

hall

, happy and relaxed.

However

, an authority told me that our group are unable to use

this

hall

for our music practising and they will close the

hall

. As we are not disturbing other

people

when we perform and we can make

people

more enjoyable, we would appreciate it if we can get a chance for our practice on the other days and we are able to reschedule our practising time which is convenient for you. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Sandar

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