You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

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letter regarding imposing restrictions on using community

hall

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on Tuesday and Friday evenings.

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with, we are a group of ten

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who normally practise singing or dancing in

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community

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on Tuesday and Friday evenings as we have other classes and part-time work on other days.

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, our group entertained with our talented music skills in order to make old

people

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, who stay around

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hall

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, happy and relaxed.

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, an authority told me that our group are unable to use

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hall

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for our music practising and they will close the

hall

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. As we are not disturbing other

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when we perform and we can make

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more enjoyable, we would appreciate it if we can get a chance for our practice on the other days and we are able to reschedule our practising time which is convenient for you. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Sandar

sandarmyint740Thu Dec 15 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

162 words

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