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In many countries today, crimes novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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This
 line chart details the transformations that occurred in 3 types of
crimes
 in New Port city over 9 years. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that
Burglary
crimes
 were the most common at the beginning of the time surveyed, while Robbery
crimes
 are by far the lowest theft figures of all time. In 2003, the
Burglary
 curve began the data at just under 3500
crimes
 in the country, significantly higher than the 2800
crimes
 of car stealing. Over the
next
 year,
Burglary
 rose to a peak of 3750
crimes
 before a precipitous fall that persisted until it reached approximately 1250
crimes
 rate in 2008. Meanwhile,
Burglary
 figures were erratic and fluctuated between 2000 to 3000 over the 7 years. Robbery
crimes
 which are considered the lesser form of crime stood at just above 500 thefts from people, plateauing at 800 in 2005 before a gradual steep to 500 robberies, and
then
 returning to a slightly depressed level at precisely 750 by 2010 and an uptick trend to end the period with the number of
crimes
 reached more than 750.
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