You have a friend who lives abroad. You have decided to apply for a course at one of the colleges in his city. Write to your friend explaining Tell them about the college and the course and why you want to do it. Ask for their help to find accommodation if you get admission to the course.

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Dear Yan, How are you? It's a long time not see you. I hope you and your family are doing fine there. I am writing

this

letter to tell you about my plan to have a

course

in Perth. Recently I have made a survey about the

beauty

course

at Perth. The college is WA academy, their

course

is about

beauty

treatment that I really want to learn it. Even though

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it is a short

course

, they are giving a certificate III of

beauty

, it will give me an opportunity to upgrade my position and skills at my workplace,

therefore

, I really want to attend

this

course

, as you know that I really have interest to

beauty

since we are in high school. I need your little favour. If they accept my application to attend the

course

, could you please find a place

that is

nearby to the college

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or a place that has easy transportation to the college

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I would be really grateful for your help. I am looking forward to getting your reply. Your loving friends, Lynda

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

179 words

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