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History of Philippines is more well known. You agree or disagree?

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The two pie charts compare 5 different areas in terms of the proportions of
world
forest
 and
timber
 in each region. Overall, it is clear that while forests in
Africa
 make up the largest percentage of total global
forest
, the opposite is true for Europe.
Additionally
, North
America
 is the country with the largest amount of
Timber
, while the figure for
Africa
 is by far the lowest. In terms of
forest
, just over half of all
forest
 in the
world
 is found in
Africa
 and North
America
, at 27% and 25% respectively.
In contrast
, only 16% of the global
forest
 is found in South
America
, and 14% in Europe. Asian countries account for 18% of the total
forest
 in the
world
. Regarding the proportions of
timber
 in these areas, North
America
 contains the largest percentage, at 30%, while 23% and 20
%
of global
timber
 can be found in South
America
 and Europe respectively. Meanwhile,
timber
 in Asia comprises 18% of
world
timber
, which is exactly double that of
Africa
.
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