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The plans below the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarize the inofrmation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The
two
 maps show the layout of a university’s
sports
 centre now, and how it will look after
redesign
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the redesign
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. Overall, it is obvious to find the difference between these
two
 maps no matter the quantity of the buildings and the shop. The map at present has a 25 meters
pool
 in the centre, and
two
 outdoor courts located on the West of the
pool
 and on the East of the
pool
. There is a reception which is semicircle in shape on the South of the
pool
.
Besides
, the Gym is located
in
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the North of the
pool
. More specifically, the university
sports
 centre's future plan is to redevelop new layouts. The leisure
pool
 will be built to the West of the original
pool
. It replaced the outdoor courts. In these
two
 pools, there is a changing room between them.
In addition
, the East of the outdoor courts will be replaced by the
sports
 hall. There are
two
 dance studios to the East of the
sports
 hall.
Two
 of the changing rooms will be built in the corner of the map. At the entrance, there is a
sports
 shop on the left side and a cafe on the right side.
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