In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is common for elders to reside with other old

people

in a nursing home while they are getting older in Britain. Some

people

advocate that it is the

government

's responsibility to pay for

fee

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the fee

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of the

care

, while other

people

are in

favor

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of affording the payment themselves. From my point of view,

costs

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the costs

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of elderly

care

should be paid by the family as well as the

government

with

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for

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following

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the following

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reasons. Family is the most intimate group in a person's life, which meant to back up each other in any

circumstances

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, not to mention

the

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basic support

such

as caring.

That is

, parents took

care

of their children when they were little, and it is their

duties

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to look after their parents while they are getting old. Taxes that citizens paid yearly to the

government

should be used while nursing

care

are

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needed in their

late

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life.

People

in the country devoted

themselves

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their

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entire

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their entire

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life

into

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to

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various kinds of industries not just for living, but

also

as a part of the

nation

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development.

For example

, a soldier who served his country

many

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years should be managed after his retirement. In

conlusion

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conclusion

, as the reasons mentioned above, the family and the

government

should both take responsibility

of

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for

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the burden of

the

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elderly

care

.