Water resources around the world are falling deficient. Analyze the possible reasons and provide your suggestions.
Water
resources
all over the world are in decline. The causes of this
situation may vary from growing population to high demand for industry
but mostly because of aqueous pollution. Add an article
the industry
To solve
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Solving
this
problem requires many steps and resources
, and I believe the most important part is changing the ways people think of protecting water
sources.
The shortage of water
is nothing new, which is caused by many reasons. A well-known reason is the blooming of population
, which leads to a high amount requirement Correct article usage
the population
of
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for
water
all over the world. Water
sources, like other types of natural resources
, are limited. Therefore
, it is inevitable that they will exhausted
someday. Change the verb form
be exhausted
Secondly
, the growing industry also
requires a lot of water
. Moreover
, water
used for industry
is contaminated by chemicals and other materials, including micro-plastic particles, so Add an article
the industry
that
it can hardly be reused and recycled after treatment. With the pollution Correct word choice
apply
continues
to happen, we may run out of Wrong verb form
continuing
water
in the near future.
To solve this
problem, one may expect the government to establish the
laws for protecting Correct article usage
apply
water
sources. The results have been seen in some developed countries in the world. Others may hope for the
changes from the business communities. The companies should and must have plans for sewage treatment as they have Correct article usage
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the
responsibilities Correct article usage
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with
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to
the
society. Correct article usage
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However
, a solution that is
best in my opinion is changing people's mind
about the situation. We all use Fix the agreement mistake
minds
water
, thus
we all need to take responsibilities
in protecting the aqueous Fix the agreement mistake
responsibility
resources
, for our lives and our youngsters
lives.
In conclusion, I believe that Change to a genitive case
youngster's
youngsters'
water
deficiency is mostly due to pollution and we all need to contribute to saving water
for our daily lives and our future.Submitted by nguyenlinhchi.hus on
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