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An E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive. Do the disadvantages of using e-mail outweigh the advantages?

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In the modern era, technology is the pillar of a human being's life. Nowadays
email
 plays
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crucial for professional and social
communication
 , but using
email
,
there are
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 many positive and negative effects on people.
This
 essay will discuss the disadvantages and advantages of using
email
 in the following paragraphs. There are many disadvantages to using
email
. To commence with, in the present, using
email
, business is affected by cybercrime. To explain , many scams
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 the company's
email
.
For example
, in the survey conducted by the Times of India, Indian hackers hacked hospital data by using
email
 and did a scam in 2021.
moreover
, many employees do work at home and they belong to a rural area. So there is sometimes the internet is not possible ,so they cannot
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communication
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 by using
email
 , so sometimes a number of disadvantages to utilising
email
.
on the other hand
, there are many advantages to using
email
. The first and foremost disadvantage
,
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email
 is secure as compared to other social apps. So, companies
major
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prefer to
email
 for professional
communication
Secondly
, a number of employers use
email
 to enrol new employees , so they can easily find the worker by using
email
. Most MNC companies and people send pdf, photos and many more secure data by using
email
 so there are many advantages of
email
.
For instance
, a survey conducted by the University of Oxford pointed out that in India , many huge companies
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 e-mail for
communication
 with their employees. In conclusion, there are many pros of
email
such
 as easy
communication
 and many more but people cannot forget the cons like cyber scams, hacking data and many more.
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