Task 1 Academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Smoke

fish

is one of the most favourite food in Europe but do you know how to make it ? How to make it from

the

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fresh

fish

into the most delicious food?

In

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This

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this

essay will let you know the exact process to make it.

Firstly

, the

fish

will be caught from the sea and

then

will be brought to the port and

then

put the

fish

on freezing to keep the whole

fish

always

in

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fresh and be very easy to transport to the place that

consume

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consumes

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it.

Secondly

, when the

fish

is in the place that uses to

defort

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deport

deform

by

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soaking the

fish

in fresh water and

then

it is ready to

cut

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be cut

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it

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into many pieces.

Thirdly

, after cutting the

fish

into pieces, it will be measured to know the exact weight of each pound of

fish

for soaking again but in the

salt water

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saltwater

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with a little bit

yellow

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of yellow

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color

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colour

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in it. Fourthly,

that is

the most important

step

cause in

this

step

, the

fish

will be

change

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changed

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from

the

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normal

fish

into

the

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a

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really delicious dish by smoking it. In

this

step

, the worker will put the salty

fish

into the griller and use all the smoke

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that come

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come

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coming

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from some special

woods

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wood

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to marinate all the

fish

with the smoke. Sixth, after the smoking

step

, all the

fish

will be put in the freezing again and

also

kept

it

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in

the

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a

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cold store and make sure

if

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it is ready

to

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for

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distribution

The

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In the

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final

step

, all of the cold

fish

will be

distrubed

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disturbed

distributed

by transporting

it

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to the

fish

and ready to sell

it

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to the customer.