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Smoke
fish
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is one of the most favourite food in Europe but do you know how to make it ? How to make it from
the
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fresh
fish
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into the most delicious food?
In
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This
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this
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essay will let you know the exact process to make it.
Firstly
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, the
fish
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will be caught from the sea and
then
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will be brought to the port and
then
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put the
fish
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on freezing to keep the whole
fish
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always
in
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fresh and be very easy to transport to the place that
consume
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consumes
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it.
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, when the
fish
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is in the place that uses to
defort
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deport
deform
by
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soaking the
fish
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in fresh water and
then
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it is ready to
cut
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be cut
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it
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into many pieces.
Thirdly
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, after cutting the
fish
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into pieces, it will be measured to know the exact weight of each pound of
fish
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for soaking again but in the
salt water
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saltwater
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with a little bit
yellow
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of yellow
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color
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colour
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in it. Fourthly,
that is
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the most important
step
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cause in
this
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step
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, the
fish
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will be
change
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changed
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from
the
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normal
fish
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into
the
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a
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really delicious dish by smoking it. In
this
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step
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, the worker will put the salty
fish
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into the griller and use all the smoke
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that come
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come
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coming
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from some special
woods
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wood
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to marinate all the
fish
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with the smoke. Sixth, after the smoking
step
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, all the
fish
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will be put in the freezing again and
also
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kept
it
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in
the
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a
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cold store and make sure
if
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it is ready
to
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for
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distribution
The
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final
step
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, all of the cold
fish
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will be
distrubed
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disturbed
distributed
by transporting
it
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to the
fish
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and ready to sell
it
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to the customer.
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