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Band 1.5

Academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below illustrates the way of making smoked
fish
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. There are 4 main steps to turn raw
fishes
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fish
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 into smoked
fish
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 as products and
then
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 retail it in
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a fishshop
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fishshop
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fish shop
.
Initially
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, fishermen need to freeze
fish
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 on time by transporting
to
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them to
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 the port after catching a ton of
fish
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.
Next
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 step, they need to soften it into fresh water as it helps them easily cut smaller pieces of
fish
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. In order to have
a
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apply
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quality smoked
fish
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 the fishermen should put part of the
fish
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 into salt water after cleaning.
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, they are going to soak it into a box and
then
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 deliver it to the
fishshop
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fish shop
 after reserving the product.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Pattern
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Comparison
  • Relationship
  • Correlation
  • Significant
  • Implication
  • Prediction
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