Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign laguage at the primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

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been debating

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matter for a long time, some believe that it's better for

children

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learning a foreign

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primary school rather than secondary school, In

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I'm going to discuss whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or not.

First

of all,

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learning

in the early stages of education is much

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easier than in the older stages, not for

language

only but

also

for other types of subjects. The

first

advantage is that

children

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less distracting stuff making it easier to learn new things. The

second

thing,

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able to benefit of additional

language

opens

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newer

windows

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to other worlds, discovering other cultures,

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the world with new eyes, watching documentaries from other countries,

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the literature of foreign civilisations creators and pioneers. Now, discussing the disadvantages, on one

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the experts

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matter

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concerned that the mother

language

would be neglected by the

children

or weakened and go in

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, I understand and respect their concerns, but in my

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is not due to the education but it's is a symptom of other problems in the whole society. But are there any other downsides? actually, I don't see any other downside to

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matter as long as it's managed properly, on one hand, learning

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foreign

language

shall not affect the

children

's fluency in the native

language

and

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doesn't reduce the time used to study other sciences.

on the other hand

, the languages learned

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to be

practiced

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all life long

otherwise

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will be forgotten,

in other

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if we are going to teach

children

a foreign

language

, we will have to make sure they practice it or all efforts

excerted

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exerted

in the early age will be lost later.

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