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International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Some people think that the problems caused by international tourism outweigh the benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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International
tourism
 has become a huge industry in the world, Some
people
 think that the problems caused by international
tourism
 outweigh the benefits,
experts
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truely
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truly
has
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have
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 been debating on
this
 topic for the past 5 years, and lots of articles and
researches
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research
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 discussing what is now
knwon
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known
 as "over
tourism
" from different sides. The development of the media and social media and the rise of
people
 named bloggers, vloggers and influencers sharing their daily life on the
internent
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internet
, where they go and what they eat
encaurged
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encouraged
 more and more
people
, from younger generations
in particular
 to travel to try new things. fueled by
increase
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an increase
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 in the income and rise of the low-priced commercial aviation industry
hotel
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and hotel
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 industry targetting
youth
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the youth
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,
this
 all lead to a surge in
the
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apply
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international
tourism
, according to the statistics, 1.5
bilion
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billion
tourist
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tourists
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 roamed the planet in 2019, the year before the covid 19 epidemic.
Does
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 the downsides outweigh the upsides?
,
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 well, it depends on how you see it, for
people
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who work
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work
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working
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 in activities related,
transport
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to transport
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, hospitality or food services, you would see
tourism
 as their mean of making the money for
living
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a living
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. if you are concerned about
the
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environment
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environmental
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 sustainability,
monuments
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monuments'
monument's
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 durability, or public health, you would see hyper-
tourism
 as
risk
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the risk
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 that has to be controlled.
Finally
, from my own
prespective
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perspective
, I would say
the
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tourism
 benefits the whole
planet
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planet's
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 population more than it harms, it
provide
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provides
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 jobs, increase income for
low income
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low-income
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socities
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societies
 and introduces
cilviliazations
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civilizations
 to each other.
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