You bought a ticket for a music concert. You’re unable to attend the concert. You want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to give him the ticket. In your letter, Give detailed information about the concert Explain why you’re unable to attend the concert Tell him how to get the ticket

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Dear Tom, How have you been these days? I am writing to ask if you are interested in attending a concert

weekend; I have a ticket for you. I know that you are a real classical music lover and I believe that you would love to attend

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orchestra concert. You have been busy with your business and you deserve a break! Many musicians of the orchestra have earned a reputation worldwide. I am sure the orchestra music

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your nerves and you will feel refreshed

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and

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reinvigorated. I waited in line for many hours to buy the ticket, but unfortunately, I will have to give up

this

opportunity due to a business trip arranged by the company at short notice. I hope you would not miss out on

this

opportunity, even though you have a tight schedule. Please come to my office to pick up the ticket or

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tell me your address, so I can post it to you. Hope you enjoy the concert! Kind regards, Joanna

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8 paragraphs

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