These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting events and festivals. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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money more on tickets to go to
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sporting events and festivals. I do believe it is
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a positive development regarding
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two points that I will mention below.
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loving sporting events will lead us to the sporting exercises like jogging, football, and many more. What I believe too, is that if someone like
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they will become
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healthy
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and live
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life happily.
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loving sporting events
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since it produces joy and
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society. To sum up, I do believe by new
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like
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people
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their
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will bring them to love
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