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In recent years, whether educational qualifications could always bring successful life give your own opinion

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I really love family comedies. You can watch
such
 films with your parents,
cozying
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 up to a soft sofa. On New Year's holidays, the movie "Home Alone" is often shown on TV. It's a pretty old movie, but I always watch it with a lot of fun. I love the adventures of little Kevin
McCullister
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McCallister
,
who
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 parents accidentally leave at home after flying with other children for the Christmas holidays to Paris. According to the plot, Kevin, in the brilliant performance of Macaulay Culkin,
one
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fights with two robbers who entered his house. And the way wittily he does it always gives me admiration. I don't get tired of laughing when the treacherous
thugs
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 Harry and Marv constantly fall into Kevin's set traps. Despite the fact that I have already seen the film many times, I constantly forget how exactly the traps of the main character were arranged. And
this
 always comes as a surprise to me again.
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