Some believe that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while other think it is more important to reward students who show progress. Discuss both views and express your own opinion?

Appreciation of
students
in the school will motivate them when moving forward in all aspects. Rewards and appreciations are memorable remarks in
students
during their school life.
However
, there is a discussion based on two different viewpoints as
students
have to be rewarded based on their academic results or based on their growth. We will discuss both views from the following and I would share my personal viewpoint on the same. On the one side of the argument, there is a viewpoint that the best academic outcome should be rewarded.
Students
are with so many capabilities and different
levels
of memory and analytical capacities. There are
students
with significant
levels
of IQ and intelligent level that lead to achieving any boundaries of academic qualification. When considering the academic rewards, it is kind of limiting
students
and capturing only the subject's knowledge based on an examination. As an example, the
first
three Sri Lankans are rewarded based on the streamwise results during the General Certificate of Education Advance level examination.
Although
this
examination evaluates the subject knowledge the
students
will be highly motivated and it will a base for their higher education path.
However
, another side of the argument is that
students
should be rewarded based on their
progress
.
Although
, most
students
are capable in academic aspects there are
students
with hidden talents and capabilities that should
also
be rewarded and appreciated. Reaching the highest
levels
through sports, dancing, arts, debating and innovative skills
also
should be rewarded. The
progress
of a student can be evaluated based on different
levels
such
as academic
progress
, personality, other talents achievements and presentation of themselves.
As a result
, the highest ranked in the academic qualification
also
can be a participant in the Olympic games in the future who can be pride to the nation. In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their own merits. On ,balance how I feel that it is important to reward
students
based on both academic results and their
progress
since
students
have different shades and every shade
has
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a value and everyone should be appreciated.
Students
are the future of the world.
Therefore
,
students
should be shown their colours based on every angle and all of them should be rewarded.
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