Smoking and alcohol consumption are injurious to health. Then why does the business of tobacco and liquor still continue?

At the present time,

alcohol

and smoking are really popular, especially for teenagers. Hi, and in

this

essay I will express my point of view about why booze

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are still alive. So

firstly

the main reason is that, if a person will drink , he'

ll

want to drink more and more, so it'

ll

give a benefit, the average cost of

alcohol

in my country is 40 000 sum (it's 4 dollars). Many companies

for example

Jack Daniels has a really big benefit. Jack Daniels are selling more than 6 million bottles, and 1 bottle cost 100$, It is more than 600 000 000 dollars each year. It's

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crazy sum of money!

Secondly

, why

government

let

alcohol

companies sell it? In my mind, because the

government

has

also

a big profit from that, for ,example if the

government

will take 10% of the money from companies, from Jack Daniels they'

ll

have 60 000 000 dollars each year. Just from 1

alcohol

. But how much alcohols are in their country? But, even

alcohol

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though alcohol

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is a really good chance to earn money for everyone, not everyone can buy it.

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teenagers can not buy it if they are less than 18 years. Or BUM's, they can just buy a spirit. So in ,

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I'

ll

recommend not thinking much about why the

government

let people buy

alcohol

. Because It is a really good way to earn. So I think after

this

essay some people know something new about

alcohol

. Thanks for paying attention

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my essay