Some employers are giving more value on hiring people with good social skills apart from good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that social skills are just as crucial as good qulification for success work?

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the compaines
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companies
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people
which have better
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soft skills
rather than
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.
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that social
skill
plays
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a vital
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role in future as
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to experience and
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qualification
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with
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this
point of view because
todays
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today's
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,
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is equally important to education. My explanation is in the
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ensuing
paragraphs.
To begin
with, these days company's
manager
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more
focus
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on
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interpersonal
skill
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.
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, in
these modern era
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,
people
are more
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socialized
with internet
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platforms
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such
as
,
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face book
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facebook
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,
instagram
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,
twitter
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and other
socia
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social
apps. So, it is easy to convince individuals.
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,
todays
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today
today's
, online business has increased,
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do
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not
required
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any
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equation
education
qualification
that only required communication
skill
.
Moreover
, some types of
job
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only need
to
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soft
skills
such
as
markting
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marketing
,
managment
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management
,
human
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resorces
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resources
(HR) all these types of
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jobs
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requied
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required
good communication.
On the other hand
, If
people
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in their work, they would have good education or experience as well as interpersonal
skills
. The director of
company
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the company
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should
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equally
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value
of
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a qualification
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qualification
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qualifications
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and soft
skills
.
For instance
, some technical jobs like technician, engineer and
others
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that
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types of
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professions
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have
also
experience.
Hence
, company
director
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directors
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are
appiont
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appoint
appointed
employee
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employees
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that
depand
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depend
depends
on role jobs. In conclusion,
people
devloped
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developed
their education
qualification
,
similarlly
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similarly
they
also
devloped
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developed
communication or social
skills
because
,
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in
this
technical era
people
know
allready
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already
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of
market
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. So, it is too hard
covince
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convince
to human beings.
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, I agree with
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viewpoint
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to
socail
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social
skill
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skills
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important
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as
good
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qualification
foe
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for
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victory
on
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work.
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