Some employers are giving more value on hiring people with good social skills apart from good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that social skills are just as crucial as good qulification for success work?

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recruit
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which have better
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plays
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to experience and
qulification
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qualification
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point of view because
todays
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technology has spread in
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is equally important to education. My explanation is in the
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paragraphs.
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with, these days company's
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more
focus
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interpersonal

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skill
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Beacuse
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,
people
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are more
socialzed
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socialized

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with internet
platform
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as
,
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face book
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facebook

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twitter
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and other
socia
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social

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apps. So, it is easy to convince individuals.
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, online business has increased,
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do
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required
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any
equcation
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equation
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qualification
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that only required communication
skill
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.
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, some types of
job
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only need
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such
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as
markting
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marketing

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managment
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management

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,
human
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(HR) all these types of
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good communication.
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, If
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want to be
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in their work, they would have good education or experience as well as interpersonal
skills
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. The director of
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equally
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value
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qualification
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and soft
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.
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, some technical jobs like technician, engineer and
others
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that
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types of
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profession
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experience.
Hence
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, company
director
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appiont
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employee
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depand
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on role jobs. In conclusion,
people
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devloped
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their education
qualification
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,
similarlly
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similarly

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they
also
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devloped
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developed

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communication or social
skills
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because
,
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technical era
people
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know
allready
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situation
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of
market
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. So, it is too hard
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to human beings.
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, I agree with
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view point
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viewpoint

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socail
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skill
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important
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good
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qualification
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foe
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victory
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work.

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