Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is the general perception of some people that teenagers should be taught the skills for good parenting in school to prepare them for
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real life. I believe that individuals become good parents with experience
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, I agree with the view that
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so that they can effectively deal with the stressful situations in marriage. There are a plethora of advantages of
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style of thinking and some will be discussed.
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, educational institutions will provide an edge to their pupils by imparting
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practical life knowledge
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them, because no one had ever taught these skills from the basic level and by developing the qualities like honesty and patience in small scholars, which are the fundamental characteristics of kind parents,
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could become famous.
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, pupils can develop exceptional communication abilities in
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manner as every mother or father should have the quality to understand the problems of their children by talking to them like, many youngsters have inferiority complex issues nowadays and it could be best handled by having
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discussion with them.
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, the required expertise of
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parents will be presented here.
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with, stress management techniques like patience
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successful nurturing because juveniles could be very aggressive or hyperactive at times and to handle them one needs a peaceful state of mind
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situation could get worst.
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, they should be smart
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because sometimes children demand hazardous things for their enjoyment and
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or father cannot
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all of their desires.
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, an adolescent
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her mother
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cooking and
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for her play but it could not be given to her because of her own safety and many occasions come on
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basis when guardians have to prohibit their offspring
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, they should be
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civilised members of
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society so that they can teach their babies the same manners in dealing with others. In conclusion, it was not be gainsaid that there are valid arguments
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the given opinion and according to my narrative proper reinforcement
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concept will yield positive results.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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