You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take Write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Robin, Hope you are in good health and spirit. I am your tenant and we shifted to your apartment
last
month. We
are
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consist of four family members me, my parents and my younger sister and we moved from our homeland Pakistan to England
last
year but we are facing accommodation problems.
To begin
with, there is no doubt that your flat is very well constructed and immaculately clean,
however
, we are not satisfied with the condition of the furniture, it is very old-fashioned and
also
it needs to be polished.
Moreover
, the sofa and dining table chairs need to be reupholstered and
also
the mattress of the master bedroom should be replaced with the new one. These are the main concerns for us at the time and you can examine these problems by visiting here anytime.
Consequently
, as I mentioned above we are very disturbed by
this
situation and we want your immediate attention
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this
issue. It is your decision to whether fix the furniture or to change it with the new one. I shall be very grateful to you. Waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, XYZ
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