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In your opinion, what incentives could be offered that would persuade more people to embrace electric cars?

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Nowadays, society already has a wide range of environmental problems
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 as global warming and deforestation. Pollution is one of the most severe issues people face nowadays, and vehicles make a huge impact on its increasing. Electric
cars
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 can become one of the solutions to
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 problem. In
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 to make electric
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 more attractive for people and make them embrace
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 a type of transport, the market must be full of various brands of
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 vehicles in any price, size,
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, and other characteristics. In
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 to provide it, it must be profitable for businesses to produce them. It means that the government needs to provide some tax incentives for producers or find another way to make the production of electric
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 more attractive and profitable for businesses. At the same time, it is necessary to attract clients and make the usage of electric
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 more comfortable. In
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 to achieve it, the whole infrastructure must be built. It means that charge stations must be located not only throughout the city but
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 in the suburban and rural areas. The number of repair stations for gas and electric
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 must be equal. The usage of electric
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 must be as comfortable as possible. Summing up, in
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 to increase the production of electric
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, it is necessary to make them more profitable than gas
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.
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, it is necessary to rid of the problems that owners of electric
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 face nowadays. One of the government and producers' goals must be to make the usage of them as much comfortable as the gas
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 have nowadays.
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