Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good but other believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Producers tend to deliver products by using air transport
due to
their higher demand. Some people believe that this
transportation method of fruits and vegetables can not be justified whilst others do not. In this
essay, I will discuss both views in detail and provide my own opinion at the final.
On one hand, aviation transportation is the fastest way compared to cargo ships through the sea and using trucks or trains on the ground. And
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Also
also
, the customer receives fresh and fully nutritious fruits and vegetables rather than keeping long days inside freezers. For example
, if a certain type of fruit can keep a very limited number of days without destroying its nutritious, this
is the best way to transport it for a long distance in which the shipment time or the truck travelling time is high.
On the other hand
, flying an aeroplane is a highly costly process resulting in to increase in the unit rate of the product in the supermarket which will be a product for limited customers who can afford the price. Accordingly
, the price will go high due to
less demand for the item according to
the basic economic concept. Furthermore
, air pollution will be high increasing the number of flying. Therefore
, transportation using aeroplanes is not much
suitable for delivering food items because of the high unit rates, air pollution, etc.
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very
To conclude
, the fruits and vegetables delivering
by using aeroplanes fastest and helping to keep the quality, but Wrong verb form
are delivered
this
is a highly costly process and effect
pollution of the atmosphere. I believe that its drawbacks Correct your spelling
affects
overweigh
the benefits. Verb problem
outweigh
Moreover
, It would be recommended that the cultivation of these foods must be encouraged to overcome this
matter with the latest technologies such
as farming inside greenhouses, etc.Submitted by jds.sampath on
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