It is better for the students to live away from the home during their university studies rather than staying with their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While

some people think that

students

ought to live alone during their tertiary education, it is believed by

other

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that it is better for them to remain living at home. In my opinion,

students

benefit from living alone in certain ways like

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independent and

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how to manage their expenses. First and foremost, one of the main reasons why it is beneficial for pupils to live away from their home is that they become totally self-dependent

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their parents and able to think for themselves. To elaborate,

university

is a time for

students

to spread their wings

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try new ideas or ways of thinking and learn to cope with

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decisions. For example, by living alone, without the interference of their parents, they develop rounder, decisive characters and

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to function well in the world.

Therefore

, it is quite advantageous to live away from family

while

studying at

university

. Another merit

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learners fleeing the parental nest is that they learn to manage money. Put simply, most

students

see

university

as a stepping stone to adulthood and so by learning to live on a budget, they develop the skills needed once they are earning a salary and balancing their finances.

For example

, living in a rented property

also

comes with responsibilities for learners

such

as paying rent on

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time and many more, and

this

further

helps in

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upcoming lives

for

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.

Hence

, residing away from home comes with

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many responsibilities which makes a student

better

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person. In conclusion,

although

it might not be feasible for all

students

, living away from

parents

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helps

university

mentees develop strength of character and useful life skills

such

as managing expenses needed for when they enter working lives.