You have a suggestion for a park near your apartment building. Write a letter to your city's council board. In your letter: Describe who you are and what your suggestion is Explain why you think this suggestion will improve the park Detail when you would like to see this suggestion in action

Dear Councilor, I am writing to offer suggestions for the maintenance of Hamps
Park
, which is located near my apartment, in the north
area
of the city. My name is Andrea Schoder and I have just bought a house in the aforementioned
area
. While I was exploring the
park
with my older sibling, we noticed that the children's
area
is greatly damaged by vandals.
Therefore
, I would suggest improving the security of the
park
,
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and rebuilding the youngster's zone, as
this
park
is the only green
area
available in
this
part of the city.
Furthermore
, I'm strongly convinced that many families with children would definitely benefit, as they would feel more secure leaving their sons to play in the
park
.
Additionally
, if the
park
would be cleaner and safer, elder people would be able to spend some time outside, near their apartments. Even though we are in the coldest season, I would highly recommend putting into action my suggestions as soon as possible.
As a result
, the
park
will be more hospitable in the summer, when the weather will be warmer. Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Andrea
Schoder
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