You have a suggestion for a park near your apartment building. Write a letter to your city's council board. In your letter: Describe who you are and what your suggestion is Explain why you think this suggestion will improve the park Detail when you would like to see this suggestion in action

Dear Councilor, I am writing to offer suggestions for the maintenance of Hamps

Park

, which is located near my apartment, in the north

area

of the city. My name is Andrea Schoder and I have just bought a house in the aforementioned

area

. While I was exploring the

park

with my older sibling, we noticed that the children's

area

is greatly damaged by vandals.

Therefore

, I would suggest improving the security of the

park

,

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and rebuilding the youngster's zone, as

this

park

is the only green

area

available in

this

part of the city.

Furthermore

, I'm strongly convinced that many families with children would definitely benefit, as they would feel more secure leaving their sons to play in the

park

.

Additionally

, if the

park

would be cleaner and safer, elder people would be able to spend some time outside, near their apartments. Even though we are in the coldest season, I would highly recommend putting into action my suggestions as soon as possible.

As a result

, the

park

will be more hospitable in the summer, when the weather will be warmer. Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Andrea

Schoder

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