The air-conditioner in your flat broke three weeks aago anf it is the middle of summer. You asked the landlord to repair it and he promised to send someone but no-one has contacted you yet. Write a letter to the landlord complaining about the situation. In your letter: explain the problem, remind the landlord about his promise, say what you want him to do.

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Dear Mr Akbar, I am your tenant for 2 years,living in your flat no 227 of silk executive. I am writing

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letter to bring your kind attention towards the pledge you made

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week about repairing the cooling system of my apartment. Two weeks ago, my parents visited me to celebrate my birthday, and they were supposed to stay 2 nights at my place.

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, unfortunately, their

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night went ridiculous due to a sudden fault in the air-conditioner.

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, they had to leave early than the already planned schedule.

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, our family gathering was spoiled. The

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morning I informed you immediately about the problem and you promised to send an electrician. It has been 2 weeks since we are going through hard warm nights with insufficient sleep which is affecting our daily routines. I was wondering if you could pay attention to

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matter on a priority basis and ought to send the concerned person. Your prompt response will be awaited. Yours faithfully, Sana Ghani

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

170 words

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