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some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools . others, however, believe taht boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often said that the government should develop charity
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, but there are many useful and useless entities. As a rule, beneficial
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 must be funded. On the one hand, it is generally considered that sports and recreation сharities contribute significantly to improving the health of communities. People are engaged in sports programs,
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 as marathons, sanatoriums and rehabilitation places are being repaired owing to funding, and athletes are
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 supported by
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 government. There are many advantages, but sometimes fraud is in
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 since in many countries
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 are not developing,
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 the money has been paid.
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, a similar situation is happening in Human Rights Charities. These
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 are more useful than the previous one, as
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 applies to residents of all countries. It helps to defend your rights without being in fear, win a court and cope with an unfair situation.
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 organization provides assistance in the fight against corruption, so funding is very essential. To conclude, I believe that all
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 deserve the support of the government, but the protection of human rights should be a priority
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