Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

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Concentration difficulties or not paying enough attention to lessons has been one of the big issues facing children, parents, and teachers for years, draining a lot of time,

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problem causes and possible

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of reasons leading to pupils' loss of concentration during classes. the

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cause would be domestic troubles, minors are very sensitive to instabilities, divorces, any of the

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absence, violence, financial problems,

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, malnutrition, or unstable daily schedule resulting in

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of suitable sleeping hours, study time, and enough period to play and have fun so Juniors can release their energy. The other factors are

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system which doesn't consider what type of sciences the kids are attracted

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art,

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biology, and others are fond

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the educational techniques and materials that in many cases are boring and forces

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to fall a sleep.

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problems, Homes shall provide

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haven to the young and schools

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to be appealing and pay attention to how the service is provided and how to yield what is fruitful.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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222 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Distraction
Concentration
Engagement
Curriculum
Attention span
Learning disorders
Interactive learning
Personalized learning
Supportive learning environment
Mental health
Organizational skills
Educational policy
Mindfulness
Screen time

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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

Fully explain your ideas

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's society, the media plays a significant role in shaping public opinion and influencing people's behavior. However, it also has its drawbacks. What problems can arise from the media's influence, and how can these issues be addressed?

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