With an increase in health problems such as obesity, steress, some people think university should make sports a compulsory module in all dgree course to what extent dobyou agree?

In today's era, the competition
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
jobs
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
incased
Correct your spelling
encased
show examples
while
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
more and more youngsters are facing health issues.
The society
Correct article usage
Society
show examples
believe
Change the verb form
believes
show examples
that the
youth
Use synonyms
should provide
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
lecture
of
Change preposition
on
show examples
medication and sport, so the mental
stress
Use synonyms
of them have decreased. I agree with
this
Linking Words
notion and the reasons
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
my agreement are explained in the upcoming paragraphs. Nowadays,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
young people are liking to get their dream job
,.
Change the punctuation
,
.
show examples
They are starting to compare themselves to others. When they are doing their best,
while
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
sometimes they experience failure so they are feeling
depress
Wrong verb form
depressed
show examples
and lock themselves in
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
room.
In a
Change preposition
A
show examples
recent study of
India
Change noun form
India's
show examples
education system say that thr more youngsters have attempted the
sucide
Correct your spelling
suicide
whereas the main reason
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
this
Linking Words
problem is failure and
stress
Use synonyms
,.
Change the punctuation
,
.
show examples
If the university are starting to conduct
sport
Change the noun form
sports
show examples
lecture so it is beneficial for
youth
Use synonyms
, who can suffer from
such
Linking Words
disease
Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
show examples
. They relieve mental
stress
Use synonyms
hence
Linking Words
they are concentrating
Change preposition
on themselves
show examples
themselves
Remove the pronoun
apply
show examples
in
positive
Change the article
a positive
show examples
way.
Furthermore
Linking Words
,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
most amount of
youth
Use synonyms
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
addicted
by
Change preposition
to
show examples
drugs and
smoke
Wrong verb form
smoking
show examples
. And the main reason
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
this
Linking Words
problem is family
stress
Use synonyms
, failure in exams and
heart break
Correct your spelling
heartbreak
show examples
from their loved ones. If they are doing yoga and medication at that time apart from
consume
Change the verb form
consuming
show examples
drugs, so it is beneficial for them. In past decades most of
the
Change the word
my
show examples
peers say that health is
best
Change the article
the best
show examples
gift for
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
people. For a specific example,
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
survey
of
Change preposition
by
show examples
Cambridge University said that after the pandemic the
youth
Use synonyms
are behaving more aggressively. They
also
Linking Words
found that
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
the
youth
Use synonyms
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
easily change their moods. To conclude, if the university
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
starting to
camaign
Correct your spelling
campaign
so it is good for their future, they are giving their 100% in each and every competition with no regrets.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example
What to do next:
Look at other essays: