One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think solutions are?
Nowadays almost in each huge urban
cities
traffic jams are getting higher and higher. From my point of view
the main solution for Add a comma
,view
this
issue can be using the
public transport the most rather Correct article usage
apply
that
private Correct word choice
than
cars
.
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are
owning private Unnecessary verb
apply
cars
day by day, because humans found having private cars
more convenient rather than using some kind
of public or compact kids of transports
, so Fix the agreement mistake
transport
that
perhaps in each Correct word choice
apply
countries
, especially in large urban Change to a singular noun
country
cities
this
way of using transport is the main problem for drivers. The main cause of this
can be the narrow roads, where drivers are always facing with
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apply
this
in each rush hours
. At that time Fix the agreement mistake
hour
people
always have some kids of difficult problems with traffic while they go to their work or study or when come back from that places. From
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On
Correct article usage
the other
other
side, Change the wording
another
population
in big urban Add an article
the population
cities
is getting higher, so this
can be main
big problem of traffic Add an article
a main
congestions
. Each family has at least 1 car or more, Fix the agreement mistake
congestion
what
means Correct pronoun usage
which
majority
of Add an article
the majority
a majority
people
do not chose
public Change the verb form
choose
transports
. Fix the agreement mistake
transport
For example
, if each person will have his or her own cars
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car
it
the near future, of Correct your spelling
in
course
there will be Add the comma(s)
,course
huge
amount of problems than now.
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a huge
However
, in this
situation
humans are able to get out Add a comma
,situation
from
Change preposition
of
this
issue by using public transports
, Fix the agreement mistake
transport
such
as trains or buses,
because Remove the comma
apply
this
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these kinds
kind
of transports
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transport
are
cheap enough to use. Change the verb form
is
On the other
hand
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,hand
this
kind
of transportation available every time despite of
some Change preposition
apply
kind
of conditions and buses are always have
their direct schedule. Change the verb form
always has
For example
, in the biggest city in the world in Singapore
each street has Add a comma
,Singapore
their
own public transport, but not each person has Correct pronoun usage
its
their
personal Change the word
a
cars
. So that, perhaps roads are not full of some Fix the agreement mistake
car
kind
of peoples
private Change noun form
people's
cars
.
To conclude, if people
will start using buses or trains in huge cities
, they will be able to reach their destination
without damaging their mood.Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite