Prevention is better than cure. Out of a country’s health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending in health education and preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a fact that preventing from being sick is more beneficial than

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Governments

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by increasing the budget for training healthy lifestyles and investing in

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sector will be benefited rather than spending on caring for and curing patients.

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, investing in

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education and public awareness, help to reduce diseases and save money. Costs of

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and hospitals are high in most countries,

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,

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has a huge cost for

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too. Because

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want to equip hospitals with sophisticated medical technologies and equipment.

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, these tools put a huge burden on

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, the number of diabetics is increasing, in my country, while awareness and education can prevent or keep the speed of incidence of diabetes or heart disease.

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steps toward

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education will help to reduce the cost of

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and the number of patients in near future.

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, Several

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combat some diseases

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as poor sanitation, viruses, and heart diseases. While prevention help to reduce the infection of

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problems

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governments

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do some actions.

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, some

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can make more parks, gyms and fitness buildings with lower costs rather than making more

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centres. The more people exercise, the fewer heart disease and diabetes will happen.

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may enable informing and educating the public about their

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, and above all, by allocating a portion of the budget to preventive measures to heighten public awareness. In conclusion, I agree with increasing the budget for educating people having a healthy lifestyle and doing preventive measures rather than spending on equipping hospitals and

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