The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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There is a debate going on
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the
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language
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will become the only
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that people will speak globally. In my
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will not be the case, but even if it is I think
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would be great for the whole world. I am going to present the advantages and disadvantages
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topic. The most beneficial advantage would be that
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could talk to anyone they want easily. Nowadays when we travel to other countries we hope that maybe they will speak
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does not happen all the time. And sometimes when we are in foreign countries it is really critical to understand others.
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, if
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could speak
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would make
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lives slightly easier, because sometimes when just a foreigner comes up and asks something in a
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it is not pleasant, because you try to speak with body
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when really you do not understand it and it all just gets a bit messy.
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, if
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would start to speak
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, all the cultures could start to vanish, because languages were the most important part of every country's culture and future generations could start to forget about their
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traditions, history and legacy. All in all, there are advantages
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understands each person and it is easy to communicate with others, but
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if countries start to forget their own
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their culture could
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start to die out and
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the legacy and history of the
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could be forgotten.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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