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Many countries want to host international sports events, while other countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#countries #host #sports #events
There is a debate going on
whether
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about whether
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 hosting sports
events
 has more problems than benefits. I believe that hosting
sport
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sports
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events
 can really put your
city
 on the map, but
also
 it can generate a
lot
 of issues and you must deal with them quickly. I am going to present
advantages
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the advantages
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 and disadvantages
regarding
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of
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this
 topic. The most beneficial advantage is fame to the
city
,
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 because when
people
 arrive there to watch sporting
events
, they
also
 visit some of the most famous places in the town and it can lead to them coming to the
city
 regularly or as a spot for
vacation
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.
Also
, when
people
 come there they
also
 spend money
for
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on
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 food,
for
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accessories,
accommodation
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and accommodation
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 and it can raise the town’s economy.
On the other
hand
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 there are some disadvantages
such
 as when a
lot
 of
people
 arrive, everyone will want to eat and if there would be a small
amount
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number
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 of restaurants, that would certainly be
a
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big trouble.
In addition
 to that, a
lot
 of
people
 will stay in the town for the night, so the town must have a couple of hotels to accommodate them.
Lastly
,
people
 tend to drink alcoholic beverages
in
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at
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 sports
events
, so the public transport and taxi services have to be working flawlessly. All in all, there are advantages and disadvantages on both sides, but I believe that if the
city
 is capable to accommodate and take care of a
lot
 of
people
,
sport
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sports
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events
 cannot do any harm and
it
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they
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 will lead to the fame for
city
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the city
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 and a raise in workers wages.
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