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Students should be taught the academic subjects only in the schools not the practical skills like cooking. To what extent di you agree or disagree?

#students #subjects #schools #skills
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Needless to say,
school
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 are the one most influential in the student's career life. Some people harbour a belief that institutions should teach
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practical skills alongside
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academic subjects.In my opinion, I tend to stand with the given statement.
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 monograph, will elaborate on the positive aspects of
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 trends and
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 lead to a logical
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conclusion
. There are
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reasons to agree with the meritorious side. The
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 and Foremost reason is that after legal age children moved out of the house and live dependently without
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 guardian. With little or lack of practical skill, it's very difficult to live on their own.The school institutions should teach them about
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manage
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time and how to organise the task which
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 them in every phase of their life.
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, paying the tax is the duty of the citizen to
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government,
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of
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student
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 does not know how to file the tax and save
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money.
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, teaching
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financial
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literacy
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 to understand to manage
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finance including
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budgeting
, investing and so on. Another observation related to
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 case is that many people suffer from abuse and became
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a controversy
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controversy
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recent time.
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Teaching
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equality
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service
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 to
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students
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the
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 young age by the school institution might be able to
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tackle
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 problem in view of society.
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Furthermore
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global communication language like
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which
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help
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 them in many ways.
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, it is apparent that all the points stand in
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good stead. To conclude
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,
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academic
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are
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 not enough to survive in the real world after graduation. To
learning
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 the basic life skill to live on our own.
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, I firmly agree with the given statement.
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