In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some countries, elderly

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often

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live at

retirement

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houses where there are nurses to look after them, and the governments have to

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the operating cost of

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houses. There are debates on who should pay for

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care

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, either

government

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or families.

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essay will discuss both points of view with an explanation.

Firstly

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, everyone will walk on

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path, all

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will get old. Along with it, many

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have a plan for their

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days.

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, many countries have

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retirement

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schemes for all citizens and taxes payers have paid taxes which should be used for their

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in future.

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, the

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will

support

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nursing

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home

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and

retirement

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homes so that there can be structured to provide the right

support

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and

care

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for old

people

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.

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, all the duty should not only

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at

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government

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. Family should

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the elderly person when they have the ability to

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for their

parents

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.

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, family is more understanding

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needs of the elderly, some of them prefer to be surrounded by familiar

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, places and objects. The most important is nursing

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only provide

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but not the love that elderly

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needs. From my own experience,taking

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of my grandfather,

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is sometimes been hard because we

all

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not trained to take

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elderly and sometimes it is hard

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our family, especially my

parents

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,

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when my both

parents

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need to rotate to be at

home

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to provide the necessary

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. In my conclusion, both of

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and the family should be a part to

support

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elderly

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, when families have

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ability to

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their

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for their

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parents

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,they should take

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responsible

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and

government

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should continue to

support

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the

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nursing

home

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and

retirement

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homes.