Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of house hold energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of Solar energy?

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Nowadays many people already installed solar
panels
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they
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want to install them. Is it great to use solar
power
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or not
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essay
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I will give you all
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drawbacks
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and benefits of using solar
power
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the one hand, solar
panels
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which
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produce solar energy have a big advantage - it is free.
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, you do not need to pay bills for
electricity
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,
this
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energy is environmentally friendly.
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that,
panels
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can work
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thirty years without any renovations.
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instance
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in my
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approximately ninety
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of the houses are installed
solar
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with solar
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panels
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,
electricity
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which
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is
produce
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solar
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from solar
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resources can decrease the
concumption
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consumption
of natural resources.
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we can stop even
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global
worming
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warming
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if all world
switch
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on solar
power
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the other hand, solar
power
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have
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some disadvantages.
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, solar
panels
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which
is produce
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electricity
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have in their composition cadmium.
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is
chemical
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substance which is dangerous for human beings.
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,
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is very expensive. It means that
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person can not afford to buy it.
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, solar
panels
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can not produce
electricity
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when
in
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the
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outside or
night
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at night
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or
rainy
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in rainy
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weather or fog.
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, you have to use local
electricity
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which is not free. In conclusion,
insatalling
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installing
solar
panels
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could reduce your bills and save you money.
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, it has some drawbacks which you should
to
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consider
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